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You're happy, you're laughing
It's the most adorable sound
I don't want to take my eyes off of you
You have me here spellbound

I love you so very much
You make my world a better place
It's like you wash all my worries away
Just with a simple embrace

And then I open my eyes just to find
That I'm still alone on the dark
Alone but surrounded by people
And that's what's breaking my heart
Surrounded by my loved ones
We're together but still we're apart

When I close my eyes again
I'm right back there in your embrace
And I wonder why this isn't real
'Cause I can so clearly see your face

But it is nothing but my mind
Trying to keep you here
'Cause it's killing me that you're gone
I just want you to be near

And when I open my eyes I find
That I'm still alone in the dark
Alone but surrounded by people
And that's what will heal my heart
Surrounded by my loved ones
They'll help me to a new start
Well, I think it's pretty self-explanatory, so... I hope you like it.
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Sincerely-Anon Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2010
This is just so nice,
I think I'll read it twice.
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Allyrah Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, how kind, thanks!
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xxkisa-chanxx Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Funny how such simple words got every emotion across perfectly. I read it like a song.

But it is nothing but my mind
Trying to keep you here
'Cause it's killing me that you're gone
I just want you to be near


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Allyrah Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you, that's nice to hear!
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foreveryoursxo Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2009   Writer
It's so sad at first... but then hopeful and almost happy at the end, like the perfect story. great job =)
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Allyrah Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you very much!
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foreveryoursxo Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2009   Writer
you're welcome =)
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